Nothing about heresy today, just prose-style.

  1. Remove all instances of the word ‘concrete’. For example, ‘a concrete possibility’ is a possibility. Again, ‘concrete words’ are words.
  2. Change all instances of the word ‘eventual’ into the word ‘possible’.
  3. Change all instances of the word ‘dramatic’ and ‘drama’ into ‘tragic’ and ‘tragedy’.
  4. Change the phrase ‘the logic of X’ into X. For example, ‘the logic of the gospel requires us to forgive’ means ‘the gospel requires us to forgive’.
  5. Lament the days of Leo XIII.